Standing in the crowd, I felt that the people didn’t notice me.
Amazed as I was, I looked in the direction of their gaze.
A smashed, upside down car revealed the mystery of my presence.
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You tell a really good story in so few words! Well done. 🙂
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I have just tried it and I’m very happy that you like reading it!
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For me, that reads much better! Very nice!!
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Thank you for your feed back:)
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You’re welcome! My pleasure. 🙂
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What is a smashed turned turtle car?
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I guess only turned turtle car would be fine?
What’s your opinion?
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I don’t know what that is.
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Turned turtle car is a car that turned upside down.
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Okay, thank you!! 😀
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I have changed the word. I was not satisfied with it.
Will you please give it a read?
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Haha,I know this feeling and the flip side of ot too- when we think everyone’s staringatus,but actually they are looking at what’s behind us 😀
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Haha, I know this feeling :D. And the flip of it too, when we think everyone’s staring at us but actually they are looking at what’s behind us
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