The Story of a Golden fish!

“Goldy, Beware! the water is deep” the Golden fish cried

But little Goldy remained calm and said “Don’t worry Mama, I’m brave! I’m a “super fish!”

On hearing these words ,she put her hands on her head. It was too much. It was vacations and the little Goldy was doing nothing but watching TV.

Next morning, she took him on an early morning swimming. The Goldy was still half asleep when she asked her to inhale some air and took him up on the surface.

Goldy saw a man standing on a ship. His eyes were red and he looked furious.

“Have you heard about Nimo”? Her mother whispered, “He also wanted to become a super fish. He never listened to his father and this man took him away. Son, the movies are not always real”.

She took a pause and added,

Nimo, never returned!”

Expressions of fear appeared on Goldy’s face and his mother smiled. She was satisfied that her little fish was not going to waste his vacations in watching too much TV now .

This story is a response to Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. The word count is 172.

This week’s prompt photo is supplied to us by Sonya O. Thanks Sonya and thank you Priceless Joy for all your efforts here 🙂


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