She was still staring at that picture when I gently took her hands into mine. They were cold.
“Grapevines are never to be trusted”. Her voice shivered with pain as she spoke
I smiled and said, “But, grapevines are looking majestic”.
“You are a liar. They’re ruthless”, she shrieked.
The redness of her eyes frightened me.
“But you can always move forward”, I tried to make her calm.
“I can’t. I have got nothing left in my life”. Her weary voice shook with the fear of uncertain future.
She clutched my arm as if she was scared and whispered, “The ecstasy of the feeling of my love made me blind. I left my parents and in these grapevines he rejected me. He left me.”
She let out a loud cry and became unconscious. The next moment, doctors huddled around her bed and I assisted them.
Once, my mother scolded me on my decision but I’m happy with my professional career.
My patients put their trust in me. I’m a nurse and I’m proud of my decision.
————————————————————————————————————————This post is a response to Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. This weeks photo is provided by Vanessa Rodriguez.
The word count is 176. Thanks Priceless Joy for this opportunity.
Emotional! 🙂 very captive. nice one.. 🙂
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I guess such stories of love and care are always inspiring to read 🙂
Thank you for such kind words!!!
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Indeed.. 🙂
My pleasure..
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A dramatic and emotional scene, in which you’ve shown the nuse’s patience in dealing with a difficult situation. I was not a nurse myself (though many of the women in my family have been, or still are) and I know how demanding the work can be. Nicely written, naturelover. 🙂
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Many thanks millie for such an encouraging comment. Indeed, nursing is a sacred profession. We often neglect this demanding career 🙂
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I was the only teacher in a family devoted to nursing. My love of geography just made the decision for me, but I always had leanings towards nursing. 🙂
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It’s great to know something about you!
The love of geography and passion for nursing depict your strong personality 🙂
I’m glad that you are able to relate yourself with this ordinary piece of writing here !
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It was an inspiring piece, so thank you!
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And thank you for finding it inspiring 🙂
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Wonderful! Just awesome.
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Very emotional and nicely done.
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I enjoyed reading this. The patient’s pain comes across really clearly and the nurse’s patience, as well. I’d say she made the correct career choice. Great story. 🙂
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Thanks afairymind!
Indeed, nursing is a sacred and beautiful profession 🙂
(May I call you afairymind or something else?)
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It’s Louise. 🙂
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Thank you Louise 🙂
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Excellent! There is a lot of emotion in this piece. Nicely done!
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Many Thanks PJ!
I actually enjoyed writing the emotions in this piece 🙂
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What a wonderful take on the prompt NL. Love the story you put up. 🙂
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Thank you Ameena!
Your comments are always encouraging 🙂
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