Story: Rusted mind

PHOTO PROMPT - ©Claire Fuller

This post is a submission to “Friday Fictioneers” hosted by ROCHELLEWISOFF. The goal is to write a story in 100 words or less.

This weeks photo prompt is provided by Claire Fuller


It’s been an hour that I had been listening to that convulsively sobbing figure.

Everyone’s trying to deceive me. Why the world is full of ugly people?” she cried

After she stopped wailing, I took a sigh of relief and said, “I know a solution to your problems”.

Rubbing her face with her hands she gave me a quizzical look.

I smiled and moving towards window, I draw the curtains aside. Blackness escaped as the streaks of golden sunshine entered.

You need to open the rusted doors and let the light come in. Go and take a walk in sunshine.”

(100 words)

19 thoughts on “Story: Rusted mind

    1. Well said Louise. Getting closer to nature provides us with some excellent opportunities of letting go of unnecessary thoughts. It really helps us to meditate.
      I’m glad that you like reading this piece 🙂

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