“I watched the vultures looking at me hungrily as I lay on the ground bleeding and injured”
These merciless clouds of death had already devoured my friends and now in this lifeless desert, I’m all alone. My vision is getting blurred and it’s hard for me to keep my eyes open.
I can see their bald heads and red eyes, they are getting closer. Oh my people! Remain witness to the fact that I’m not a traitor, I’m a patriot, I’m not a lawbreaker but I respect law.
I’m an ordinary person who has assigned some special duties. Remember, I’m a journalist who has embraced martyrdom in the line of duty.
Despite all the advancements, there are still some areas in the world which are considered dangerous for journalists.
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This post is a response to Mondays Finish the Story. We are provided with an opening line and we’re supposed to write a story between 100-150 words.
Good story! – thank you for the reminder of what is at stake when journos work in dangerous places to give us the latest news. (from an ex-journo)
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I’m from a country where journalists are performing a daunting task. I need to share it and I’m really to glad to receive feedback from an ex- journalist here 🙂
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Very thought provoking. Lovely take
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Your words of lovely take makes me smile.
Thanks a lot for finding it thought provoking 🙂
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Great story, quite thought-provoking. I like your description “merciless clouds of death”.
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Well, thank you so much for your kind words.
It’s more than a year that I wrote this piece. The vulture reminds me of that old file in my computer 🙂
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Wonderful story.. Nice take on this prompt..
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Many thanks for reading and commenting 🙂
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Madeeha, that’s very thoughtful of you. Being a journalism graduate, I love how you impart such a deep message in your story. Very well done. 🙂
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Thank you Maria, I feel happy that you like this idea of writing.
Some areas in Pakistan are really dangerous for journalists but media personals are brave here. This story is inspired by a real incident.
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You’re very welcome Madeeha. I wish them well and safety all the time. Journalists are some of the few brave souls this world has.
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Indeed journalists sometimes put their life in danger just to cover News. Well penned! 🙂
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Very sad and realistic too.
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Very good to compare the vultures to the people who would attack the journalists.
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Thanks Deborah,
My country falls in a list of areas which are considered dangerous for journalists. Inspiration came from a real life incident.
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Great of you to be willing to write about it.
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I love how you wrote this story in one scene, in the present. It’s true tho, we sadly tend to ignore the enormous risk journalists take
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Thank you Ameena for your nice words of encouragement. I wrote this piece sometime ago. The inspiration came from a real life event when a renowned journalist in my country was attacked.
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Journalism is dangerous in many places and this desert seems to be a place of peril.
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Wonderful story and so true. Journalists often do put their lives on the line.
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Thank you PJ
Inspiration came from some real life events.
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I can imagine, because yes that is so true! Too many do give their lives.
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It’s been a while that a renowned journalist of my country was attacked. It was a shocking incident and I expressed my feelings through words. The prompt reminds me of my early piece of writing.
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It’s sad that they were attacked, even if it was a long time ago. I can imagine it was very shocking.
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Sadly, a tale of our times. Not a job I would care to take on.
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