The burden of the love of my parents was too much and their wishes and desires made me so tired that with the passage of time, I lost my vigor to speak. Life continued to move on and today when I was arranging my books, a worn out sketchpad caught my attention. The fine drawings took me into those days of my childhood when I was called an obedient child, for while listening to my parents’ dreams, I used to become tongue -tied.
I blew the dust off and sighed.
In all my life, I remained my parents’ favorite sketchbook.
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You write so well and with so much emotion invested in them that there is very little space for “suggestions for improvement”!
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Your kind words really means a lot.
Thank you for your time in reading and commenting (:
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And that painting is so nice! you do have a lot of skills. Those were the apt 100 words.. 🙂
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Beautiful written .. Listening to your parents is good as that’s what Allah swt commended to respect parents no matter what..
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Perfect wording! 🙂 Enjoyed reading.
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Your words of perfect wording makes me smile 🙂
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they picked you up and put you down, but were always around!, and not sure to find
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Very concise! 🙂
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It’s great
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