I admit I was elder but it was you who always acted like a responsible child. I was nervous; you were confident, I was reserved; you were frank and despite the age difference of five years you were my best friend.
I had complete trust in you. Once, getting furious, I was on the brink of losing my control when you came to rescue me. Holding my hand you took me into a garden. There we both planted flowers and you asked me to water them daily. I took great care of them and on that calm morning after taking their picture you never forget to remind me the importance of spreading love in life.
On that day, standing beside you, I promised that I would never lose control of myself again.
It’s been a long time and I’m still keeping my promise. I’ve selected my dress and soon I’m going to start my new life. I very much like you to be here with me but I’m not going to lose my temper. For, I’m aware that where ever I’ll go your support would always be with me.
My brave pilot, May you always fly high
Lots of love from your sister
This post is written for Sunday Photo Fiction – September 25th – October 2nd 2016 by Sunday Fiction.
This is a wonderful story, Madeeha. Reading it gives one the sense of admiration and love between a brother and sister. There are times in our life when one small event can change our life in some way and he has helped change hers in a positive way.
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Your’e right Jessie, siblings can help each other in moving forward. Sisters are brothers are our support..
Thank you Jessie, for finding it a wonderful story to read 🙂
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Amazing where flowers can take the mind!! A beautiful sentiment!! 🙂
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Thank you Deb, I like epistolary fiction and this time when I’m writing this comment Hellen Keller’s book the story of my life is placed in front of me. I like reading her letters again and again 🙂
I agree, picture of flowers can take mind to some unusual places 🙂
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You’re very welcome! Helen Keller was such a profound and amazing woman. She can teach us so much!! I’m glad you are enjoying her letters. 🙂
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Awesome tale Madeeha. I like You can feel what she feels with her brother. It’s great.
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Thank you, and I must say picture is so very beautiful !!!
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Thank you Madeeha. I wasn’t sure whether to include it or not as it is just flowers. It has created so many beautiful tales though. And some very chilling ones 🙂
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It’s a refreshing picture and a brilliant selection 🙂
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Thanks you and they have been 🙂
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Hii! I’ve nominated you for liebster award..check the link below
https://zenyswords.wordpress.com/2016/09/29/liebster-award/
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Thank you zeny for considering just left a comment on your blog
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Sweet story . Loved it .
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Much thanks, it makes me happy 🙂
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This was a beautiful dedication. Is it dedicated to one?
For that picture, the story is so perfect! 🙂
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Thanks a many for finding it a beautiful dedication, It’s really uplifting for me and I’ll be honest, it’s a complete work of fiction 🙂
While wrting it, I was somewhat emotionally involved. Thought a gloomy end but picture of flowers didn’t allow me to do that 🙂
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Pleasure is all mine!
It’s that emotion which gives the feel of real. A happy-read post. 🙂
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Aww, such an emotional piece Madeeha. It felt all too real to me.
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While writing I was feeling same…
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