Thanks and beginning

Plants in a Window --- Image by © Royalty-Free/Corbis

Each day is a hope
In every morning there is scope
When duties become tough
Early morning sun gives me strength
I feel blessed to start new day.


This post is in response to Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka #Poetry Prompt Challenge #9 – THANKS & BEGINNINGS.

Thanks reminds me of being blessed and for me beginning is a fresh start, I’ve used new for the word beginning here.

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10 thoughts on “Thanks and beginning

    1. You’re right, the traditional Japanese format poetry in the form of haiku and Tanka, do not use rhyming words.
      Once, while going through rules I came across similar question on yahoo answers. Someone while replying to the answer wrote
      A Haiku that rhymes
      Inappropriate at times
      Though they are not crimes 🙂 🙂

      In order to keep the beauty of original form, it’s better not to use rhyme 🙂

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